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Post by Deleted on Jan 3, 2014 16:48:28 GMT -6
Greetings, my friends. I hope everyone enjoyed the Christmas holidays! I'm still working on tracks for my new CD, and the song below is the 12th track in the group, which I finished the demo for over the holidays. It's sort of an "album filler" type of song. I suppose every CD has those. LOL!
The song is called "For You". It could have a few different meanings to different people, but for me, it's a song about a man reminding the woman whom he loves how important she is to him and that everything he does is for her. Anyway, it's just a very simple demo that could be improved to include better production, more instrument variation, etc.
Cheers, Joseph
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For You Words and music by Joseph Spain Created with ChordPulse 2.2 and Acoustica Mixcraft 6.1 Produced by Joseph Spain CD: Harlot's Sleeves Demo recording Copyright: Joseph Spain 2013, 2014
Verse 1 Tell me my love If my eyes stare right through you Tell me please love Do our hearts beat in time There's one road to take It's the lone path to follow It leads to a place Where one question I'll pose Do you know?
Chorus Each time I see you The hours you're with me The dreams that I chase Don't you know They're for you
Bridge 1 You are my morning With sunrise, you light my sky Follow your heart and you'll see me waiting inside
Verse 2 Hear me my love When my words go unspoken Know in your heart I adore you inside There's one sign to seek It's the one clue I'm with you It lives in a place Where one question I'll pose Do you know?
Bridge 2 I am your evening With sunset, I light your heart Follow my voice and you'll see me waiting inside
Chorus 2 Each time you kiss me The way that you hold me The love in your eyes You should know I'm for you
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Post by dreamer on Jan 3, 2014 16:59:22 GMT -6
love it flows very well and your vocals are great great job
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Post by Deleted on Jan 3, 2014 17:01:19 GMT -6
love it flows very well and your vocals are great great job Thanks very much for listening and the kind words, my friend. I'm looking forward to hearing new material by you soon as well.
Cheers, Joseph
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Post by dreamer on Jan 3, 2014 17:36:06 GMT -6
im a writer not a singer i write for Drac and 1 off my poems got turned into a song by Mel called black rose that was fun think rob going to remix it ? anyway keep posting and happy new year
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Post by Deleted on Jan 3, 2014 19:54:25 GMT -6
im a writer not a singer i write for Drac and 1 off my poems got turned into a song by Mel called black rose that was fun think rob going to remix it ? anyway keep posting and happy new year I understand. I'm not really a singer either. I just enjoy writing songs as a fun diversion and making very basic demos. I don't harbor any hopes of making it big or anything like that. LOL! Although it would be fun on the off-chance if someone important happened to notice one of my songs and said, "You know, I have one of my artists in mind who could really do this song justice, and we want to consider it for the next album." That would cool, but I harbor no illusions of that happening. I just write for fun, and scratch out some basic demos to give an idea of what the song is supposed to sound like in general.
I really enjoyed your poem that Mel sang. That was a very good track all around, as well as your Drac composition. Good stuff!
Yeah, Rob will remix Black Rose for you, Just ask him! He does a great job in his studio.
Have a good evening and keep the good poems coming!
Cheers, Joseph
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Post by Mel on Jan 4, 2014 0:04:25 GMT -6
"I'm not really a singer either" The first time you posted on the js forum what made me notice you was the fact you sing and very well..I could listen to you all day long..I love the lyrics, so romantic <3 ..I dont write for fun,(though I may say I do, dont believe me) even though I enjoy being creative,it is more a compulsion, pain drives me, music is a good distraction and channel for emotions...I hate the fact that everytime I want to stop writing and turn away from it, something compels me to keep writing..well that is my melancholy coming out again lol..
Dreamer you write beautiful poetry..as does Quirky!!
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Post by rod on Jan 4, 2014 6:53:19 GMT -6
Super Super demo!
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Post by Deleted on Jan 4, 2014 9:37:58 GMT -6
"I'm not really a singer either"The first time you posted on the js forum what made me notice you was the fact you sing and very well..I could listen to you all day long.. I love the lyrics, so romantic <3 ..I dont write for fun,(though I may say I do, dont believe me) even though I enjoy being creative,it is more a compulsion, pain drives me, music is a good distraction and channel for emotions...I hate the fact that everytime I want to stop writing and turn away from it, something compels me to keep writing..well that is my melancholy coming out again lol.. Dreamer you write beautiful poetry..as does Quirky!! Thank you very much for the kind words, Mel. I love your voice and compositions! Your melancholy nature always manifests in your songs, which are great. Keep the good songs coming, my friend.
I also agree with you about Dreamer and Quirky! Good stuff!
Cheers, Joseph
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Post by Deleted on Jan 4, 2014 9:38:58 GMT -6
Thanks very much for listening and the kind words, my friend. I'm looking forward to your next composition soon. Be sure to post it here for us to listen to.
Cheers, Joseph
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Post by trebor999 on Jan 5, 2014 11:42:10 GMT -6
Hi Joseph, Another good demo my friend. I liked the chord progression and the lyrics/vocals. I know it is only a rough demo so my only criticism would be in the instrumentation. I think a change in the instrumentation in the bridge and chorus would really make a big difference. Robert
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Post by Deleted on Jan 5, 2014 18:42:13 GMT -6
Hi Joseph, Another good demo my friend. I liked the chord progression and the lyrics/vocals. I know it is only a rough demo so my only criticism would be in the instrumentation. I think a change in the instrumentation in the bridge and chorus would really make a big difference. Robert Thanks for listening, the kind words, and the constructive feedback, my friend. I definitely agree with you. In a finished version, I would definitely want more instrument variation in the sections that you mentioned.
Cheers, Joseph
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Post by Drac on Jan 13, 2014 12:42:19 GMT -6
Hi Joe You saying that your not really a singer is like saying planet earth is square. you have a great voice my friend, and make top quality music. great demo, i enjoyed it and looking forward to the final cut. Take care Drac (Steve)
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Post by Deleted on Jan 14, 2014 12:36:57 GMT -6
Hi Joe You saying that your not really a singer is like saying planet earth is square. you have a great voice my friend, and make top quality music. great demo, i enjoyed it and looking forward to the final cut. Take care Drac (Steve) Thank you very much for listening and the kind words, my friend!
Cheers, Joseph
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Post by quirky on Jan 23, 2014 17:35:12 GMT -6
Great song Joseph
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Post by Deleted on Jan 27, 2014 16:28:40 GMT -6
Great song Joseph Thanks very much for listening and your kind words, my friend!
Cheers, Joseph
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