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Post by dreamer on Dec 17, 2013 15:38:58 GMT -6
Heavenly Tears
Tears fall from my eyes, As your tiny hands fall from mine. A few days is all we had with you, It seemed a full life time.
I dreamed how we’d play, In the sun-snow and rain. How you would grow into a man, Making me proud everyday.
The dull sound of the alarm, As doctors come rushing in. Angels flying above you, Heavenly children sing.
I see you leave your body, And glance down at me. There’s a sudden realization, No pain, your totally free.
Now my son is in heaven, Safe as safe can be. Heavenly tears are falling, From him to you to me.
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Black Rose
As I sit and contemplate the reason, Why your hearts so cold. My heart thumping with fear, As you pass me the Black Rose.
The rain washing away my tears, As I look into your soul. What happened to our love within, The sadness consumed it all.
As the thunder rolls in, With lighting everywhere. One by one the petals fall, Why is life so unfair.
As the thorns pierce my skin, As I hold the rose so tight. Blood seeping down my wrist, As the storm lashes out tonight.
In the heart of the storm, I see you fade away. Now I know the Black Rose, Takes all the goodness away.
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The Stillness Of The Water
As the moonlight shines and breaks across the lake, I suddenly realize the depths of my mistakes.
The stillness of the water and the reflection of the oar. This seldom told story, lost on this lake, forever more
As my boat glides through the water, it leaves ripples to times before. How the moon and stars guided me. Have I lost your love, forever more?
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Post by trebor999 on Dec 17, 2013 20:36:37 GMT -6
Hi Pete,
Some excellent writing. I enjoyed the read.
Robert
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Post by rod on Dec 17, 2013 21:07:22 GMT -6
Hi Pete, having a little navigating issues here, I like your poetry by the way, good job!!!!
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Post by quirky on Dec 18, 2013 2:12:21 GMT -6
Nice... 
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Post by hatchetrocker on Dec 18, 2013 3:04:45 GMT -6
very cool
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Post by dreamer on Dec 20, 2013 11:41:25 GMT -6
thanks guys i love to write Drac has fixed his link now plses check it out its called.... writing my songs ....
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