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Post by Deleted on Jun 29, 2014 22:53:34 GMT -6
Hi everyone. I hope you are all having a good summer.
... and speaking of summer...
I wrote a song last month for Mel to use in a fun Soundclick challenge. The theme of the challenge was "summer". Mel recorded a very nice version of the song in her great style and it received a lot of cool and positive comments on Soundclick. Her vocals are awesome as usual.
The song is about a woman loving the summers that she spends with her love at the beach, and she sadly laments how they must part at the end of each summer. As they part, she reminds him that he'll always adore her and fondly remember the way she wears her hair for him during their summers together. It's really an upbeat, airy song about young love in the summertime. :-)
Mel's great version of the song is here ---> app.box.com/s/vyqpbsg0v05cajpwtzwa
My original rough demo is here ---> app.box.com/s/dfr892rcb80yfmjpkned
And, please, no laughing at me for singing a woman's song -- lol! It expressly was written for a woman (Mel) to sing, not a guy, so if Mel had not recorded it, it never would have seen the light of day in its present form, but it could be rewritten slightly to make it a song about a guy singing about his woman's summer hair.
My Summer Hair Words and music by Joseph Spain Created with Chordpulse 2.2 and Acoustica Mixcraft 6.1 Demo recording for MSG's Soundclick challenge entry Copyright: Joseph Spain 2014 Verse 1 It starts with a kiss and a breeze on the beach The look in your eyes When you're looking at me A summer's forever when I'm in your arms I melt into you and all your sweet charms Verse 2 Our days and our nights Fly by fast and so free Two hearts bound in love One in eternity And you must remember when you're gone away Take this kiss that you'll miss and return here someday Chorus You will remember me Under the stars Each summer reminds you of me from afar Our very last night we vowed love in a prayer You'll always adore me in my summer hair Verse 3 You told me you loved the way moonlight shines on my hair at my shoulders from dusk until light Summers are Heaven Till you go away The price of goodbye is to cherish today Verse 4 So look at me now And remember this place The strands of my hair softly spill in your face Please hold this forever in all that you do Taste this kiss that you'll miss and return to me soon Bridge Your goodbyes just break my heart Why do summers have to end Lonely nights where tears don't dry Why does heartbreak never mend
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Post by rod on Jun 30, 2014 18:58:16 GMT -6
This is a wonderful song!!!! Lyrics are gold, perfect song for Mel, now this kind of song needs to heard on the airwaves, not just the internet!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 30, 2014 19:40:43 GMT -6
Thanks very much for listening and your supportive comments, my friend! Much appreciated! Cheers, Joseph
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Post by quirky on Jul 1, 2014 5:05:16 GMT -6
Very Cool Song Joseph and very well performed by Mel! It's kind of like a song you might hear in an animated musical actually. Sort of like Frozen but on the Beach lol. Well done to both of you and Joseph... I would of just put up Mel's version lol
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Post by Deleted on Jul 1, 2014 9:17:33 GMT -6
Very Cool Song Joseph and very well performed by Mel! It's kind of like a song you might hear in an animated musical actually. Sort of like Frozen but on the Beach lol. Well done to both of you and Joseph... I would of just put up Mel's version lol Thanks very much for listening and your supportive comments, my friend. Yes, absolutely, Mel's version rules!
LOL! Yes, I was hesitant to post the original demo for those reasons, but I figured that if Barry Gibb had the courage to release his demo of "Woman in Love" that he wrote for Barbra Streisand... then what the hay!
...and I am indeed in love with a very special woman who does have very nice summer hair, spring hair, autumn hair, winter hair, wet hair, and dry hair. LOL! She is one of a kind.
Cheers, Joseph
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Post by dave on Jul 11, 2014 23:34:40 GMT -6
I love the tune...nice instrument work! I especially love the lyrics...so delicious and sweet. Here's a photo my wife took today of my "Summer Hair"....
And.....there's not a lot to see.....lol !
Cool song Mel and Joseph....nice work, both of you !!!
Dave
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Post by Mel on Jul 13, 2014 19:35:20 GMT -6
thank you Dave..glad you liked the song, joseph is a talented songwriter for sure, but you shouldn't be flaunting all that hair in front of him seeing as he hasn't any lol..heheh
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Post by Deleted on Jul 13, 2014 19:39:23 GMT -6
Thanks much for listening and your comments, my friend. Writing a song about hair was a vicarious experience for me! Cheers, Joseph
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Post by dave on Jul 13, 2014 21:46:39 GMT -6
thank you Dave..glad you liked the song, joseph is a talented songwriter for sure, but you shouldn't be flaunting all that hair in front of him seeing as he hasn't any lol..heheh I apologize for any comments I made that may have offended any of the other "Distinguished Heads" in our group........
Dave
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Post by dave on Jul 13, 2014 22:05:52 GMT -6
Thanks much for listening and your comments, my friend. Writing a song about hair was a vicarious experience for me! Cheers, Joseph "Vicarious" says it all ....I try to live like that.....This song is bold and beautiful Bro !
Dave
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