Deleted
Deleted Member
Posts: 0
|
Post by Deleted on Mar 26, 2014 8:02:46 GMT -6
This is an early sketch for a new song about two people who are in love, but because of life's circumstances that are beyond their control, they must remain apart. Although they are unable to be together physically, they still believe that they are both together "in all the ways that matter".
I have additional ideas for developing the song further such as adding a lead guitar layer, additional acoustic guitar fills and percussion fills, and a more robust synth layer. :-D
https%3A//api.soundcloud.com/tracks/141472660
In All The Ways That Matter
Words and music by Joseph Spain
Created with ChordPulse 2.5 and Acoustica Mixcraft 6.1
Produced by Joseph Spain
CD: Harlot's Sleeves
Demo recording
Copyright: Joseph Spain 2014
Verse 1
Fire into flame
I could testify
If you wanna know in your heart
where you stand my love
Fiction into fact
I could memorize
Every little smile in your face
When you own my love
The sun sets every night without you
My flesh draws every breath without you
I could never be with another
never live for another's heart
Like you own my soul
Chorus
In every way we're one together
In every day we're one forever
In all the ways that matter
we are one eternally
Bridge
Truth defines the way love hurts
Cuts to the bone and takes by force
The end of you would be finality
The end of me
Verse 2
Summer's lonely rain
Can we compromise
If you wanna see with your eyes
That you own my heart
Never live a lie
In the dark of night
If you wanna see in your mind
What's inside my love
The moon shines every night without you
My heart just cries and dies without you
I could never love any other
never live for another's heart
'cause you own my love
|
|
|
|
Post by Mel on Mar 26, 2014 8:42:19 GMT -6
Another beautifully written song..I love the lyrics and your singing..thanks for posting!!
|
|
Deleted
Deleted Member
Posts: 0
|
Post by Deleted on Mar 26, 2014 9:07:25 GMT -6
Thank you for listening, Mel! You are most kind, my friend!  Cheers, Joseph |
|
|
|
Post by Mel on Mar 26, 2014 9:12:19 GMT -6
I'm not being kind..its the truth..you're a very talented songwriter :-)
|
|
Deleted
Deleted Member
Posts: 0
|
Post by Deleted on Mar 26, 2014 10:47:25 GMT -6
Thank you, Mel!!! :-D
I am looking forward to your next song! Your compositions and talented voice are very worthy of being featured in a film, my friend. :-)
Cheers,
Joseph :-)
|
|
|
|
Post by quirky on Mar 29, 2014 21:45:45 GMT -6
Hi Joseph... Adding the extra layers will give this already great song just what it needs man... really like it man  |
|
Deleted
Deleted Member
Posts: 0
|
Post by Deleted on Mar 30, 2014 19:12:37 GMT -6
Hi Joseph... Adding the extra layers will give this already great song just what it needs man... really like it man Thanks, Quirky! I sincerely appreciate you listening and the feedback, my friend! :-D
Cheers, Joseph :-D
|
|
|
|
Post by rod on Mar 31, 2014 13:05:50 GMT -6
super job!
|
|
Deleted
Deleted Member
Posts: 0
|
Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2014 16:28:31 GMT -6
Thanks for listening and your comments, Rod! Cheers, Joseph |
|
|
|
Post by dave on Apr 2, 2014 11:48:55 GMT -6
Great song Joseph ! Cool track, I love the lyrics and vocals....and the bridge is excellent !
Dave |
|
|
|
Post by trebor999 on Apr 3, 2014 20:22:17 GMT -6
A little polish here and there and poof...
great tune Joseph.
Robert
|
|
|
|
Post by crystal on Apr 4, 2014 2:45:35 GMT -6
Sounds like Andy Gibb and the guy from Placebo rolled into one...interesting sound! |
|
omega
New Member
Posts: 28 
|
Post by omega on Apr 4, 2014 18:03:23 GMT -6
Lyrics and vocals are awesome super job
|
|
Deleted
Deleted Member
Posts: 0
|
Post by Deleted on Apr 4, 2014 19:41:59 GMT -6
Thanks Dave, Robert, Crystal, and Omega for listening and your kind words. Much appreciated! Cheers, Joseph |
|
