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Post by Deleted on Mar 15, 2014 22:42:58 GMT -6
I've written a new song that involves a fantasy theme. The song is about a young man writing a letter to his future love, who actually traveled back in time to ensure that they meet much sooner to avoid a lifetime of emptiness before they finally do meet and fall in love later in life. When the woman journeyed back in time, she told the man that they were destined to meet and fall in love someday, but that they must meet much sooner. When she was speaking to him, she told him of their love and happiness and she told him "you'll adore me" in the future, hence the title.
The verses and the bridge of the song are actually the man speaking to the woman in a letter that he's writing to her after her magical visit to the past, as she instructed him to do in order to arrange an earlier meeting between them. The chorus of the song is actually the man remembering the woman's words to him, when she told him to listen to her, trust her and never marry anyone else, because he would come to love and adore her very much someday. :-)
You'll believe as I believe in love forever more
Take my hand and know that you will love me as no one before
Dreams are seeds like all God's things
Please listen to my words
'cause you are free to love me
and you'll worship at my feet
you'll adore me
This is a rough demo of the song, and it obviously needs more work, but it should provide an idea of how the song goes...
https%3A//api.soundcloud.com/tracks/140533293
You'll Adore Me
Words and music by Joseph Spain
Created with ChordPulse 2.5 and Acoustica Mixcraft 6.1
Produced by Joseph Spain
CD: Harlot's Sleeves
Demo recording
Copyright: Joseph Spain 2014
Verse 1
There's things to say
So much to say
My heart must say to you
You traveled far under moon and stars
To tell me what to do
I know this may sound strange
But you're my destiny and fate
Our hearts together, one forever
As you told me today
Chorus
You'll believe as I believe in love forever more
Take my hand and know that you will love me as no one before
Dreams are seeds like all God's things
Please listen to my words
'cause you are free to love me
and you'll worship at my feet
you'll adore me
Bridge
Your words of wisdom
Whispered to me
I cannot forget
I write this letter to an angel
Whom I've never met
I know we're written in the stars
And you will show me why someday love
I trust I'll come to love you
And adore you till my dying day love
Verse 2
Two hearts to save
Our love to make
You found me in the past
Where you decide to set things right
Ensure our course and path
With Heaven's blessing now
You are the only love I need
Our hearts together, one forever
As you told me today
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Post by rod on Mar 15, 2014 23:36:57 GMT -6
Joseph this is a beautiful production, vocal tracks are nice and clean, your lyrics are strong , better than the mainstream stuff we listen to, and I love how you follow the standard verse chorus and bridge, very professional!!!!!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 15, 2014 23:55:15 GMT -6
Thank you very for listening and your kind words, my friend! Much appreciated! :-)
Now that I have all of the tracks written for my new CD, I plan to hold a series of contests with cash rewards in the future. The way each contest will work is that entrants will re-create my backing tracks (one contest per track), but with better instrumentation, production, etc. The contest rules will simply be that entrants must remain true to my original backing track, without changing the chord structure, tempo, or melody. I will award the winner of each contest $100. I plan to do this for all 13 tracks over a period of time (not all at once) for a total of $1300 USD in contest award money. This would allow me to get the best backing tracks possible for my demos. I would also hold a similar contest for the final production and mastering of each track with my vocals, but I may also hold a vocal contest too.
I like this approach better than sending my rough demos off to a professional and paying without really knowing what the final quality would be like.
I plan to hold these contests here and at other online music sites in the future. Any thoughts?
Cheers,
Joseph :-)
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Post by trebor999 on Mar 16, 2014 11:12:02 GMT -6
Hi Joseph,
I could tell you all the great things about this but instead I'll just say that this really very very good. I really enjoyed listening to this!
Robert
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Post by Deleted on Mar 16, 2014 11:19:57 GMT -6
Thanks much for listening and the kind words, Robert! I have to say that I really enjoyed listening to your collaboration with Quirky on "Hopeless". You guys are really setting a new higher standard! After hearing that, I was almost shamed into not posting my new song because "Hopeless" was so damned good! Great guitar work on that one, my friend! I can easily imagine that as a number 1 rock track.
For my new song, I have some ideas for fillers and other instrumental variations that should make it better. :-)
Cheers,
Joseph :-)
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Post by Mel on Mar 16, 2014 14:26:33 GMT -6
Oh my goodness you give the Beegees a run for their money..I love the way you sing! Such a sweet story behind the song..this is a great job, well done!!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 16, 2014 14:47:54 GMT -6
Thank you so much, Mel! I've enjoyed all of your recent tracks and collaborations as well. Your voice and talents are amazing! Please keep the good songs and the hits coming, my friend! :-)
Cheers,
Joseph :-)
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Post by dave on Mar 17, 2014 11:25:29 GMT -6
This is a cool jam! I love the story in the lyrics. Nice work bro....... 
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Post by Deleted on Mar 17, 2014 14:22:15 GMT -6
Thanks much for listening and the kind words, Dave! Much appreciated! I'm looking forward to hearing some new material from you soon!
Cheers,
Joseph :-)
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Post by quirky on Mar 29, 2014 21:52:01 GMT -6
Hey I'm sure you're Barry Gibb man... Come on out with it... lol Awesome song and I love the Concept Joseph... Could be a movie  |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 30, 2014 19:14:18 GMT -6
Hey I'm sure you're Barry Gibb man... Come on out with it... lol Awesome song and I love the Concept Joseph... Could be a movie Wow, thanks my friend! I really appreciate you listening and your comments. Many thanks!
Cheers, Joseph :-D
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