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Post by dave on Mar 12, 2014 6:04:00 GMT -6
Hey everybody....
I sent Irene a JS track and she knocked it out of the park ! What she did with it is so good that even she's willing to admit it!....lol She sent it to music xray, and they want her to send them some more songs in the same style...for a possible record deal. She's going to work on some tracks and I'm going to work on some too, but if we all get on it, we could give her more tracks to work with so maybe she can get a four song demo done pretty quick while the offer is still hot.
She doesn't even know I'm posting this, and she may end up hating me for it, but I'm willing to chance it. We all love her and she knows it....so I'd rather beg for forgiveness than ask for permission on this one. I mean she has done so much for us....right?
Here's the song.....she calls it "Don't Forget Me" ....and it is awesome!
Dave
app.box.com/s/mnjkoephmo9ah8nddddf © Rania Leany and Dave Hensley, March 12, 2014
Lyrics:
DON’T FORGET ME © Rania Leany, March 12, 2014
My lips will never speak of what my heart longs to say
And what I hold within, will never go away
I smile with dead eyes
My laughter is hollow like a drum..
Look at the shadow I have become
I can still hear you say…
Chorus:
Don’t forget me when I’m gone
Remember I loved you all along
Be happy and just move on
Please try and be oh so strong
No more sweet words whispered in my ear
Just distant memories of you holding me near
How can I live without half my soul?
We were one, and your love made me whole
I am tormented by your last words
When I heard you say
Chorus:
Don’t forget me when I’m gone
Remember I loved you all along
Be happy and just move on
Please try and be oh so strong
Bridge:
The warmth of your love is gone from my heart
Like leaving a window open in a storm
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Post by rod on Mar 12, 2014 10:23:23 GMT -6
Now we are talking!!!! Good job Dave.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 12, 2014 19:27:36 GMT -6
What an awesome song, you two! This is a great track!!! Excellent vocals, as usual, Irene! I truly hope that it gets noticed by someone important, as it certainly should. In fact, many of your songs are worthy of much more notice. Nice work!!! :-D
Cheers,
Joseph :-D
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Post by Mel on Mar 13, 2014 0:29:44 GMT -6
Aww Dave how can I ever hate you or be displeased? You know me well enough you can feel free to post or say anything..I thank you for wanting to help and encourage me and for the great tracks you send my way..
If anybody wants to collaborate with me and help me get some songs with this "vocal style" and be part of my journey that would be great..
Here is the initial feedback I got then I sent some other songs and an email and here is his reply underneath:
your Quote Is
“Hold on everyone we found the next Lana del ray......this is amazing”
Your review Is
Loved the mix the whole sound is crazy and so good i could listen to a full album and if your not signed you should be the voice the tune the atmosphere is fantastic dont change it you are hit material send me a Demo for publishing and record deal......i need to know what you have ready to go and a bio of the band etc
You are amazing loved every bit of it well done
Interaction Summary
Name: Exclusive Detailed Song and Career Critque
Person: ANTHONY .J .H
Dear Irene,
Now as regards your music i like it, i liked the initial track that was very like a new style of Lana del ray only you put a different spin on it of your own.
The other versions of your vocal styles i think the songs are good but the style is like so many others, i think you should definitely go down the route of moody vocal and sound very atmospheric it really is superb.
Now what i need to hear is some more tracks in the style of del ray only your style if you understand what im saying which im sure you do as you are very talented and i need to know how many tracks you have completed studio quality ?
Don't give up on your dream ,when i first started in 78 it took me over 300 letters to grab a position in a company and i now own the company which at times is not easy but you never give up and as an independent company im very much like you i have to make decisions that are hard sometimes and i cant sign everyone ,wish i could ....
Have you had any releases ?? Albums ?? How many tracks have you ? How many songs have you ? Do you have access to recording facilities ?
And where do you want to be in five years ?
How does your family feel about your career ? How many musicians want to form a band are where uk usa canada ??
Well i think that answers your letter i have not said no and i have not rejected any tracks i can possibly use your music we will see after you answer the above and i get round to your letter have patients I'm writing this at 5-20am im already in touch with korea who start work at 3 am uk time ..
Im not promising anything but I'm not rejecting anything as im always looking for recording artist and writers i have over 100 writers worldwide and have a bank of writers in Nashville of 5000 who i call upon to write specifics as i get daily and weekly placements in tv film and for record companies artist recently we supplied tracks to Robbie williams and kylie and beyonce who's producer in LA was looking for new music.
I hope that gives you a reply to your letter and remember i am the only employee in my company and i have to deal worldwide with many company's so be patient.
Look forward to hearing from you
Warmly
Anthony CEO
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Post by hatchetrocker on Mar 13, 2014 4:22:32 GMT -6
Very cool. Good luck you 2
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Post by trebor999 on Mar 13, 2014 17:11:37 GMT -6
Hi Mel,
Wow... This certainly sounds promising. I wish you all the best and success. If you need any help from me, you know I will.
Robert
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Post by quirky on Mar 29, 2014 22:08:23 GMT -6
Such a great song Dave and Mel... I love this style of vocal, and the lyrics are just perfect for it.  |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 30, 2014 19:23:11 GMT -6
I completely agree with you on all points, Quirky. This song truly deserves a shot to be in a film or on the radio. An excellent track all around. :-D
Cheers,
Joseph
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