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Post by Deleted on Apr 9, 2014 10:34:34 GMT -6
I wrote a new song to dedicate to everyone who is in love but apart, which is always very hard. In the song, the guy is telling his soul mate not to worry or have anxieties because he is promised to her and he belongs to her.
Cheers,
Joseph
Edit: The full demo with vocals is here... 
https%3A//api.soundcloud.com/tracks/147150758
Promised to You Words and music by Joseph Spain Created with ChordPulse 2.2 and Acoustica Mixcraft 6.1 Produced by Joseph Spain CD: Harlot's Sleeves Demo recording Copyright: Joseph Spain 2014 Verse 1 You know our story goes so far Beyond the world of limitations Thunder and lightning, sun and stars Nothing can stop my dedication I cannot hide from what must come A moment with you I come undone I take what you give to me Our hearts speak With you every moment Love comes over me Chorus Baby you own me And you can be sure Come take what is yours I'm promised to you Whatever may come I vow to be yours Of this you'll be sure I'm promised to you, love Bridge Don't fear the dark of night Trust my words, my love Don't fear the pain of life You are loved, angel Verse 2 You know my dream stays on course The longer I'm longing your invitation Volcano or fire in Hell's full force I swear to survive and reach salvation I cannot hide from what you are I sit on my hands in your waterfall I take what you give to me Our hearts speak With you every moment Love comes over me
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Post by quirky on Apr 9, 2014 19:30:25 GMT -6
Add the Vocals and mix it up Joseph  ... The Bass seems a little strong through my Phones but with your style of vocal, the crunchy bass may suit it very well. I really like the lyrics... If you don't mind I'd like to suggest, change "girl' with "angel".... "You are loved, sweet angel" just a suggestion mate. Looking forward to hearing the vocs in it Mick |
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Post by dave on Apr 9, 2014 23:16:10 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2014 14:15:03 GMT -6
Thanks much for listening, Mick and Dave! I appreciate the feedback, my friends. Dave, thank you for the mix. I really like it! I am still working on the song, and making a few changes to lyrics and the mix (less bass/low end). Cheers, Joseph  |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2014 22:41:22 GMT -6
Add the Vocals and mix it up Joseph ... The Bass seems a little strong through my Phones but with your style of vocal, the crunchy bass may suit it very well. I really like the lyrics... If you don't mind I'd like to suggest, change "girl' with "angel".... "You are loved, sweet angel" just a suggestion mate. Looking forward to hearing the vocs in it Mick Mick, thanks again for the lyrics suggestion...
I made some additional changes to the lyrics, which I have now edited in my original post at the top. While I liked your suggestion a lot, the phrase at the end needs to be two syllables to fit the melody. So, I changed the phrase from "sweet girl" to "angel".
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Post by rod on Apr 11, 2014 0:06:54 GMT -6
Awesome song Joseph!!!
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Post by trebor999 on Apr 11, 2014 11:24:05 GMT -6
The update is sounding awesome! Lookin forward to hearin it with the vocals.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 13, 2014 19:54:56 GMT -6
Thanks Robert!!!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 13, 2014 20:00:49 GMT -6
Here is the full demo with vocals. Thanks for listening.
https%3A//api.soundcloud.com/tracks/147150758
Promised to You
Words and music by Joseph Spain
Created with ChordPulse 2.2 and Acoustica Mixcraft 6.1
Produced by Joseph Spain
CD: Harlot's Sleeves
Demo recording
Copyright: Joseph Spain 2014
Verse 1
You know our story goes so far
Beyond the world of limitations
Thunder and lightning, sun and stars
Nothing can stop my dedication
I cannot hide from what must come
A moment with you I come undone
I take what you give to me
Our hearts speak
With you every moment
Love comes over me
Chorus
Baby you own me
And you can be sure
Come take what is yours
I'm promised to you
Whatever may come
I vow to be yours
Of this you'll be sure
I'm promised to you, love
Bridge
Don't fear the dark of night
Trust my words, my love
Don't fear the pain of life
You are loved, angel
Verse 2
You know my dream stays on course
The longer I'm longing your invitation
Volcano or fire in Hell's full force
I swear to survive and reach salvation
I cannot hide from what you are
I sit on my hands in your waterfall
I take what you give to me
Our hearts speak
With you every moment
Love comes over me
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Post by Mel on Apr 13, 2014 20:21:14 GMT -6
another great love song Joseph! a wonderful combination of lyrics vocals and music..beautiful job!!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 13, 2014 20:27:13 GMT -6
another great love song Joseph! a wonderful combination of lyrics vocals and music..beautiful job!! Thank you so much for listening and your nice comments, my friend! It is much appreciated! I am really looking forward to your next track and singing with you again!
Cheers, Joseph 
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Post by rod on Apr 13, 2014 22:55:31 GMT -6
Wow!!!
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Post by dave on Apr 13, 2014 23:17:29 GMT -6
This Rocks! Excellent full demo Bro!!! I can't wait to hear the final mix!!!.....
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Post by Deleted on Apr 14, 2014 18:01:59 GMT -6
Thanks for listening and your comments, Rod and Dave! Much appreciated, my friends. I tweaked the bridge vocals a bit. No need to listen again. Just some minor changes. Cheers, Joseph |
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Post by quirky on Apr 19, 2014 19:02:19 GMT -6
Nice Joseph... I'm thrilled you took my advice on that lyric change... Angel fits so perfectly. Great addition to the album... Looking forward to it's release |
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... The Bass seems a little strong through my Phones but with your style of vocal, the crunchy bass may suit it very well. I really like the lyrics... If you don't mind I'd like to suggest, change "girl' with "angel".... "You are loved, sweet angel" just a suggestion mate. Looking forward to hearing the vocs in it 
